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For the question. 'How would you describe the role of a commercial lawyer and why have you chosen a career in commercial law?'. I am going to provide two reasons so would it be okay to do one introductory sentence which 'describes the role of a commercial lawyer' and then have the rest of the paragraph focus on 'why have you chosen a career in commercial law.'
Also, would these descriptions suffice: 'The role of a commercial lawyer involves approaching legal problems with an awareness of the commercial world.' + 'The role of commercial lawyers involves working with change-makers in the commercial world.'
Hey @legal18 ,
If I were to approach this, I would personally split the question into two paragraphs. I would not make it an even split because I would want to touch more on why commercial law. However, not at the expense of fully explaining the other arm of the question. Thus, I’d say be mindful of how you divide the word count.
The descriptions are good, but to further improve it, you could be more specific on the role of a commercial lawyer. As such, you may find it worthwhile touching on things like the unique aspects of the job that can’t be applied to any other job in the corporate world. For example, for the second description you provided, any corporate professional will work with change-makers in the commercial world. To provide a more specialised answer, you will need to dig deep into what really drives you about the role. The reason I’m saying this is because we find it easier as humans to talk about things that excite us. What excites you, @legal18, about the role of a commercial lawyer? It certainly isn’t the most easy question to answer, but one which will elevate your descriptive analysis on this question once you tackle it. So take a moment to uncover this, perhaps through a nice hot cup of tea, or something that will relax you enough to dig deep. This applies to the why commercial law question as well. Law firms want to see your story (communicated professionally).
You are on a really good track. Best of luck with the application!