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Hey @lawyersumIn the work experience section, I have listed all my commercial law events, virtual experiences, and webinars attended in one entry. As my other legal work experiences are more pro bono, legal aid etc, I really want to use these events to explain what I did (Case studies, interactive workshops) and the skills I picked up so my motivation for commercial law comes across as strong. @Andrei Radu @Ram Sabaratnam @Amma Usman I would appreciate any insights on how best to put these experiences in writing.
It’s great that you grouped all your commercial law events, virtual experiences, and webinars under one heading—I did the same, and from a recruiter’s perspective, it’s an efficient way to organise information. Highlighting the skills and insights you gained from these experiences is also an excellent approach to reinforcing your motivation for commercial law.
Aim to keep descriptions brief; there’s no need to detail every activity in each experience. Instead, consider summarising the broader skills and commercial awareness points you developed in a single bullet point, followed by some succinct prose.
If there’s one experience you’d like to expand on, you could frame it like this: “During the X law firm virtual program, I gained insights into value creation in the private equity industry and observed how firms achieve this in practice.” From there, you could add specific skills and examples that align with the role.
Hope this helps!