I am sick of getting rejected post app, and so I am overhauling my work experienc/employment section in the hope that it helps (I am almost 30 so have a load of different employment that is very varied). Just wondering if anyone has a structure for these employment descriptions that they know are what graduate recruitment wants to see? I have tried putting in loads of detail, and then less, and never really been happy with it. I understand that my application answers also need improving, but it can't harm to fix up my work section.
@Jessica Booker @Andrei Radu @Ram Sabaratnam @Amma Usman if you have any insights please do let me know. Or anybody else of course too

Thank you!
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@Parsorandini
I completely understand how overwhelming it is to face rejections post-application – it’s a tough process, but the fact that you’re taking the time to rethink your work experience section shows your dedication. Sometimes even small adjustments can make a huge difference, so it’s great that you’re focusing on this.
To start off with, I suggest sticking to about six experiences that are well-detailed, concise, and demonstrate the skills that graduate recruitment teams are looking for.
1. Be Selective but Strategic: Focus on roles that best highlight your transferable skills, even if they’re not directly legal. Think of experiences where you showed communication, leadership, organisation, or problem-solving – those are always valued.
2. Add Specific Examples: For each role, focus on what tasks you did, what results you achieved, and if possible, quantify the outcomes. For example, did you streamline a process, lead a team, or receive positive feedback?
Something like:
While working as a marketing assistant, I developed a social media strategy that increased engagement by 25% in three months. My manager praised my ability to analyse trends and adapt content to our audience.
3. Group Similar Experiences: If you’ve done multiple similar things – like open days, or forage programmes – group them together under one entry.
For example:
Completed virtual work experiences at Firm A, Firm B, and Firm C, gaining exposure to key areas of commercial law, including M&A and litigation. Learnt how to analyse contracts, conduct legal research, and present findings to senior associates. In particular, during the virtual work experience at Firm B, I …
This avoids repetition and keeps your section clear and focused.
4. Keep Links to Law or the Firm Minimal: Unless the word count allows or the firm specifically asks for it, I don’t usually try to link my experiences to the firm or the law in this section. I save that for the main application answers. However, if there’s a role that clearly aligns with the firm’s values or a key trainee skill, you could include a short mention of it.
I’ve also made a few posts on this thread which I hope will be of help as well -
https://www.thecorporatelawacademy.com/forum/threads/work-experience-section.9392/#post-189202