TCLA Direct Training Contract Applications Discussion Thread 2022-23

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Hello everyone! I was wondering if it is appropriate to name drop someone in a cover letter/firm application? In particular, I've had the opportunity to meet and talk to a partner who is working in an area that I am strongly interested into, and whose journal article I used in my dissertation. Overall we had a great conversation and I was obviously very enthusiastic about it but I am scared of mentioning his name and more inclined to use 'a partner'.
 

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Hello everyone! I was wondering if it is appropriate to name drop someone in a cover letter/firm application? In particular, I've had the opportunity to meet and talk to a partner who is working in an area that I am strongly interested into, and whose journal article I used in my dissertation. Overall we had a great conversation and I was obviously very enthusiastic about it but I am scared of mentioning his name and more inclined to use 'a partner'.
The name-dropping here is fine because its actually quite specific (e.g. the link to your dissertation and your interest in the subject). The interesting part is actually that, rather than the partner's name, but it just makes sense to include the partners name given the specific aspects of it.
 
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Hello, could someone please clarify the best way to write out education in Freshfields' application form? Should it be chronological (starting with senior secondary) or reverse chronological (most to least recent)? The form itself just states "Education 1", "Education 2", etc and the guidance on the form is as follows: "Please check / enter your education details, ensuring to include your secondary / higher education"

Would greatly appreciate any guidance, thank you!
 

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Hello, could someone please clarify the best way to write out education in Freshfields' application form? Should it be chronological (starting with senior secondary) or reverse chronological (most to least recent)? The form itself just states "Education 1", "Education 2", etc and the guidance on the form is as follows: "Please check / enter your education details, ensuring to include your secondary / higher education"

Would greatly appreciate any guidance, thank you!
I don’t think it really matters as long as it’s in an order and not mixed up. I think you could argue that either chronological or reverse chronological are appropriate.

I’d probably lead with the strongest - for instance, my A-levels are pretty average but my degree results are strong, so I’d probably lead with that first and go backwards. That might not make sense for someone who hasn’t completed their degree though.
 
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For the Freshfields cover letter/personal statement, is it ok to break it up using sub-headings? eg. Why Law, Why Freshfields etc
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You can break it up, but I often find the subheadings aren’t really needed as signposting. Include them and then critically evaluate your writing and consider whether they add anything to your statement or whether the sections are pretty obvious anyway without them.
 

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    Hi @Jessica Booker ,

    Freshfields has a section for a "Brief Summary of prizes, scholarships, positions of responsibility". Can this be in bullet points, or should it be in prose? And does each prize/position of responsibility have to be explained, or just mentioned?

    Also, should I only add achievements here that are not mentioned anywhere else in the application? Or can certain achievements be repeated if they are important?

    Finally, what type of achievements should be included within this section? Would moots and debates fall within the ambit of "prizes"? Or is it restricted to academic prizes?
     
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    Hi @Jessica Booker ,

    Freshfields has a section for a "Brief Summary of prizes, scholarships, positions of responsibility". Can this be in bullet points, or should it be in prose? And does each prize/position of responsibility have to be explained, or just mentioned?

    Also, should I only add achievements here that are not mentioned anywhere else in the application? Or can certain achievements be repeated if they are important?

    Finally, what type of achievements should be included within this section? Would moots and debates fall within the ambit of "prizes"? Or is it restricted to academic prizes?
    I would write in short sentences - I wouldn't bullet point it, but you can afford to be super concise.

    I would explain things where it needs to be explained - for instance, you can't assume your reader understands the prize name unless the name itself makes it obvious.

    If you only have a short amount of words (think it's 100-150 from memory), then you may need to be selective in what you include. Therefore repeating detail from other sections might be a waste. It really depends on what you put in this section.

    Any achievements can be put in here though - they don't need to be academic.
     
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