Jessica Booker
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You don't need to change your work experience unless it is a role you are still in and there are additional experiences/responsibilities you have gained since your last application. You could obviously just to a quick check to see whether you would explain things slightly differently. For instance, the last time I reviewed my CV I thought on several points "why the hell did you write it like that, would be better if you said it like this instead" and so changed my CV ever so slightly to what I felt was a better worded version of the same experiences.@Jessica Booker @Ram Sabaratnam @Andrei Radu , and anybody who wishes to help!
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When applying for the next cycle for a firm where you got rejected (but u feel the issue was the firm-specific questions rather than the work experience section) , how much do you suggest I should change my work experience? I usually use a set paragraph for most of the applications while tailoring it a bit.
I also wanted to ask for your guidance here, I'm very unsure what to do. I got rejected after AC for FF for summer. I was thinking of applying to the next winter one (as I wont be eligible for the next summer one as its only for 2nd years), and wanted to ask whether I should, in the personal statement , in some creative way (no clue how, yet) mention that I made it to the application stage of Freshfields, and perhaps speak about my positive experience at the AC to show interest In the firm, as well as mention ive taken into account their advice on how to improve(which was commercial awareness)? not sure if im having a creative moment which will stand out or whether its a horrible idea ahahaha
Also, any tips on improving commercial awareness? There's a wide range of things like M&A, financing, etc and im not sure how someone can "learn" all of this because I'm not too sure 1. where to look 2. what to look for as I feel it's so vast
thank you!!
For Freshfields personal statements, I have seen enough people state having come through to assessment centre last cycle they are more determined to apply to the firm again. It can work very well to be clear that you go to that stage, but I do think you need to have a significant development somewhere in your application for them to warrant bringing you through to interview again. If you can particularly show how you have worked on the feedback they provided, then this can also be helpful in convincing them to interview you again.
Commercial awareness is not really about learning stuff. Instead, see it as an opportunity to show how you are generally interested in commercial matters and pursuing opportunities to learn more. This could be with actual learning (courses, training etc) or could be by taking on responsibility to work on commercial topics (blogging, writing articles, taking part in commercial awareness competitions, taking more more BD/research task or other activities that deal with more commercial topics at work). Its not really about going "I now know about M&A", its more about demonstrating you have actively sought opportunities to think more commercially in the things you do.