Moreover, the firm’s breadth of expertise would allow me the freedom to discover where I want to specialise, whilst providing certainty that I would qualify into a market-leading practice regardless of my final choice.
I am going round and round in circles on this grammar for this sentence. Can anyone else weigh in and tell me where they would put commas?
"Moreover, the firm’s breadth of expertise would allow me the freedom to discover where I want to specialise[,] whilst providing certainty that I would qualify into a market-leading practice regardless of my final choice."
I ran it through Grammarly and it recommended taking out the comma in red.
I see what you mean with regards to grammar though. You could shorten the sentence to:
"Moreover, the firm's breadth of expertise would allow me the freedom to discover where I want to specialise. Irrespective of my final choice, I know that I would quality into a market-leading practice regardless".