Hi
@confusedlawstudent - I really like the ideas that you have so far!
In my opinion, your decision to define success in an academic, professional and personal sense sounds very reasonable as it will allow you to structure your answer more clearly! ☺️
When it comes to an example of success at university, this will depend of your own definition of success. So, bearing in mind what you have proposed (working hard to achieve your goals) I think that you could consider the following points:
- Have you ever struggled with a particular subject/assignment and had to take a step back to determine how you would approach this situation? What steps did you take to "recalibrate" (e.g. did you reach out to anyone specific or create a new study schedule that prioritised this material)? How did these steps help you achieve your goal?
- Did you have to balance many responsibilities at university (e.g. studies, part-time job, volunteer work, societies)? What were those and why were they important to you? How did you approach this challenge to achieve your goal?
- During your studies, was there a moment when you noticed that you needed to work on a particular skill of yours (e.g. presentation skills)? If so, did you take any initiative to work on this? What did this look like and how did it help you achieve your goal?
In general, I think that what all of these examples have in common is that they all mention 1) a challenge that you faced and 2) how you tackled this challenge. However, this explanation should not be very descriptive.
To ensure that your example addresses the issue of success, it is important that you prioritise reflecting on why this was something worth pursuing for you. Achievements/success can be quite subjective, but I think that as long as you clarify why
you personally consider something to be an achievement/success, no example will be "wrong" here!
I hope this helps!! 😄