Jessica Booker
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Hi Jessica! Would love to hear your thoughts on this;
Could you advise on how should a candidate incorporate "why you" throughout the former two sections of "why Freshfields" and "Why commercial law"? Does it essentially mean to be explicit about how certain aspects of Freshfields and commercial law is particularly interesting to myself, and use specific personal experiences to back them up?
Quite confused on this area.
Thank you so much Jessica!
Nothing much has changed in 10 years - this was the advice we were giving out in 2010. My only point is to not use STAR in the application form - you haven’t got the word count and it isn’t necessary to do so. Save that for the interview. (STAR does not work in applications unless you are explicitly asked the question “tell me about a time you have...).
The personal statement is exactly that - personal. You don’t have to weave in the why you into why them or why commercial law if you don’t want to. For some people it will work for others it won’t.
My advice with the FBD personal statement is to stop trying to find a perfect answer/structure and just focus on the perfect structure for your story.
You don’t necessarily need to have evidence for a “why them” or “why commercial law”. The evidence can just be clearly articulating you know what you are letting yourself in for.