Just a very minor point and I'm sure @Jessica Booker would agree (I hope anyway haha) I would try and avoid using words like 'fascinated' as I think they're a bit cliché. Say you're very interested by all means but I just think 'fascinated' could come across as a tad excessive.Morning Jessica,
What is the best way of expressing interest in a particular practice area if you don't have a lot of experience it? I'm applying to a firm that does a lot of financial crime and fraud work (pretty much their only work tbh).
My reasons for being interested are:
I am concerned that these reasons might be fairly weak.
- that I am fascinated by the high profile nature of the work and how it overlaps with commercial affairs.
- the fact that this firm's financial crime/fraud practice is very international -> I come from an international background myself and spent 2 years during my university years living, studying and working abroad and like working with people from different backgrounds
- because I want to build a career in disputes law, which I am drawn to because of my work experience in the area.
For point 1, I want to convey my enthusiasm for financial crime but don't think I'm doing it well. I feel I lack a strong basis to back up why I enjoy its overlap with the business world. Other than doing criminal law during my law degree and observing a few money laundering/fraud trials, I haven't done anything extra that could show my interest.
Point 2 is one that I've mentioned on a number of applications that have been rejected recently. It might not be the only reason, but are there better things I could be pointing out?
Point 3 is probably alright as disputes are the firm's only offering. But is saying you enjoyed work experience in the area enough?
I'm curious to know your thoughts.
Other than that your reasons look good to me! Just make sure you're able to say why they interest YOU specifically as that's the most important thing - best of luck!