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2020-21 Vacation Scheme Applications Discussion
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It would be unlikely to make a huge difference but I would capitalise both for a title.
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If in a heading, then capitalised - Sales Assistant. If in a sentence like "I was a sales assistant", then not.
That's definitely something that I would include if I were approaching this question; if you're in doubt, though, consider looking for alternative answers and then choosing your favourite from the different options.
I will just say, I helped with recruitment in my company and, although we do not do legal work, I can probably give a little bit of insight in response to this. When you're looking through 1000+ CVs/applications, you often get a sense of both (1) when a candidate is elaborating, and (2) where information is missing. LinkedIn just helps to verify your suspicions and give a little bit further insight into a candidate. For example, a candidate had once listed particularly relevant experience on their CV but had worded it in a confusing way, seemingly to fit it into the two-page format. LinkedIn gave us the ability to learn a bit more about this experience, because they'd written a lot more about it here, and to double-check that our assessment of its relevance was correct. On another occasion, one candidate had not listed the place they went to university on their CV! It's important to also remember that those involved in recruitment are human and, in the way that you'd casually stalk someone on Facebook to see what they were like, they might just want to see what you're like outside of an application form
Don't you love it when you submit a wasted application... 
Got someone to check my application and they changed part of it from 'I am applying to Travers Smith's Summer Vacation Scheme' to 'I am applying to the Travers Smith's Summer Vacation Scheme'... which just sounds very wrong/ weird.
Only realised they made this change after I submitted - am I right in thinking this will be an immediate no when I've spoken about attention to detail later in the cover letter?
Got someone to check my application and they changed part of it from 'I am applying to Travers Smith's Summer Vacation Scheme' to 'I am applying to the Travers Smith's Summer Vacation Scheme'... which just sounds very wrong/ weird.
Only realised they made this change after I submitted - am I right in thinking this will be an immediate no when I've spoken about attention to detail later in the cover letter?
Thank you Jessica! So like for the position bit of the work experience, we capitalise?
Don't you love it when you submit a wasted application...
Got someone to check my application and they changed part of it from 'I am applying to Travers Smith's Summer Vacation Scheme' to 'I am applying to the Travers Smith's Summer Vacation Scheme'... which just sounds very wrong/ weird.
Only realised they made this change after I submitted - am I right in thinking this will be an immediate no when I've spoken about attention to detail later in the cover letter?
I don’t think saying the sounds weird, I think it’s the ‘s that is the issue but honestly it’s very minute. Literally took me about a minute to see the difference. Please dont stress
Don't you love it when you submit a wasted application...
Got someone to check my application and they changed part of it from 'I am applying to Travers Smith's Summer Vacation Scheme' to 'I am applying to the Travers Smith's Summer Vacation Scheme'... which just sounds very wrong/ weird.
Only realised they made this change after I submitted - am I right in thinking this will be an immediate no when I've spoken about attention to detail later in the cover letter?
not necessarily! I'm sure they will take a more holistic approach. don't lose hope over something this minor. In one of my applications to a random job i applied to when i was like 17 I wrote 'Kind regards' at the end of the letter hahaha so you're fine!
Obviously I'm not an expert but I definitely don't think that would be an immediate no. That sentence will be such a minor part of your application. I must've made 4 mistakes in 4 different applications (and I'm talking really obvious like repeating a word or missing out words) and I got through to the next stage on all of them. Don't stress about itDon't you love it when you submit a wasted application...
Got someone to check my application and they changed part of it from 'I am applying to Travers Smith's Summer Vacation Scheme' to 'I am applying to the Travers Smith's Summer Vacation Scheme'... which just sounds very wrong/ weird.
Only realised they made this change after I submitted - am I right in thinking this will be an immediate no when I've spoken about attention to detail later in the cover letter?
Don't you love it when you submit a wasted application...
Got someone to check my application and they changed part of it from 'I am applying to Travers Smith's Summer Vacation Scheme' to 'I am applying to the Travers Smith's Summer Vacation Scheme'... which just sounds very wrong/ weird.
Only realised they made this change after I submitted - am I right in thinking this will be an immediate no when I've spoken about attention to detail later in the cover letter?
Not necessarily a straight no but it's not something that's likely to go in your favour. At least you'll never make the mistake of submitting an app without proof reading again! If you were questioned about it at a later stage, you would just be up front, explain the situation and say you made a mistake that you learned from.
I really don't think this will matter in the grand scheme of things, try not to stress yourself out over thisDon't you love it when you submit a wasted application...
Got someone to check my application and they changed part of it from 'I am applying to Travers Smith's Summer Vacation Scheme' to 'I am applying to the Travers Smith's Summer Vacation Scheme'... which just sounds very wrong/ weird.
Only realised they made this change after I submitted - am I right in thinking this will be an immediate no when I've spoken about attention to detail later in the cover letter?
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Don't you love it when you submit a wasted application...
Got someone to check my application and they changed part of it from 'I am applying to Travers Smith's Summer Vacation Scheme' to 'I am applying to the Travers Smith's Summer Vacation Scheme'... which just sounds very wrong/ weird.
Only realised they made this change after I submitted - am I right in thinking this will be an immediate no when I've spoken about attention to detail later in the cover letter?
It’s not an immediate no.
But no matter who gives you advice/guidance on your application, it’s always important to double check things yourself. They are equally human as you and can potentially make errors.
Since this is not unknown, what should I make sure to include in my LinkedIn? Or any advice on a LinkedIn profile in general for someone seeking a TC/VS?
Thank you
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I can't comment objectively on how good/ bad my profile is, but feel free to check mine out if you want a bit of inspo:
linkedin.com/in/jacobmiller99
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A lot of the time you can't find someone on LinkedIn. I wouldn't worry about this too much.
This article might be of help though:
(1) 10 LinkedIn Tips for Students & New Grads | LinkedIn
It took me about 30 seconds to realise the issue here... I recommend using tracked changes whenever someone reviews/ makes amendments to your app, then you can clearly see what they’ve changed and reject any amendments you disagree with!Don't you love it when you submit a wasted application...
Got someone to check my application and they changed part of it from 'I am applying to Travers Smith's Summer Vacation Scheme' to 'I am applying to the Travers Smith's Summer Vacation Scheme'... which just sounds very wrong/ weird.
Only realised they made this change after I submitted - am I right in thinking this will be an immediate no when I've spoken about attention to detail later in the cover letter?
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