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<blockquote data-quote="Amma Usman" data-source="post: 189879" data-attributes="member: 36740"><p>Hey [USER=38040]@Sad_Old_Grad[/USER] ,</p><p></p><p>Thanks for sending this through. Also, please never feel like it’s a bother - we’re here to help! I also completely get how nerve twitching the whole process can be. I’ve provided some detailed feedback below;</p><p></p><p><strong><u>Role (Junior Legal Assistant, Non-UK Organisation)</u></strong></p><p></p><ol> <li data-xf-list-type="ol">The reference to ensuring "the legal use of materials" is a great start, but it would be even more impactful to specify how this was achieved. For instance, did you apply particular provisions of international copyright law or specific treaties, such as the Berne Convention or any jurisdiction-specific regulations? Mentioning these can demonstrate a deeper understanding of the legal frameworks you navigated and show the complexity of your work.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ol">Highlighting the multilingual aspect of your work can showcase your ability to navigate multi-jurisdictional matters. Specify the languages involved and how they added complexity to your tasks. Did you translate or interpret legal texts, or liaise with parties who communicated in different languages?</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ol">There’s a slight disjoint between the second and third sentences. For example, "I was <strong><u>(also)</u></strong> responsible for maximising…" would improve the connection and help clarify that the cost-effectiveness and legal soundness efforts were part of a larger strategy, tying them back to the earlier discussion on compliance.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ol">While the description is strong, it could benefit from showcasing the outcomes or achievements more explicitly. For instance, how successful were you in securing cost-effective agreements? Were there instances where you resolved particularly challenging copyright issues? Numbers or examples of high-stakes situations could add significant weight.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ol"><strong><em><u>The last sentence is</u></em></strong> <strong><em><u>excellent</u></em></strong> as it demonstrates an understanding of the distinction between private individuals and businesses in a commercial legal context. Consider elaborating briefly on how you adapted your communication and negotiation strategy in such cases. Did it require softer negotiation skills or additional legal investigation?</li> </ol><p></p><p><strong><u>Role (Intern)</u></strong></p><p></p><ol> <li data-xf-list-type="ol">Replace brackets with dashes or commas for a more seamless and polished flow. For example, “primarily pro-bono” could be written with dashes or with commas for clarity.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ol">The section does a great job of showcasing your skills, but it could be even more concise in listing the competencies gained. Instead of stating them as a series, consider weaving them into the narrative. For example: "The preparatory work, including meticulous legal research, constructing arguments, and assembling bundles, developed my client-facing skills and provided a practical appreciation of the importance of detail in complex legal matters." Dashes could also be used here instead. </li> <li data-xf-list-type="ol">The explanation of your role in the main case is detailed and insightful. However, you could further emphasise how your research contributed to the outcome. For example: "My research into the supplier's distribution system and its discriminatory practices directly supported the client’s claim, with the Tribunal unanimously finding in their favour."</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ol">While the use of terms like "Selective Distribution Agreement (SDA)" and "hard-core restriction" is appropriate, consider briefly explaining them for clarity if this section is aimed at non-specialist readers or recruiters unfamiliar with competition law specifics. This ensures accessibility without undermining the technical detail.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ol">Although the section focuses well on your individual contributions, adding a line about collaborating with the solicitor or supporting clients could showcase teamwork skills, which are equally valued. For example: "Working closely with the solicitor, I developed an understanding of how to align legal research with practical client needs, ensuring that tribunal arguments were legally sound and also comprehensible to litigants in person."</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ol">The concluding sentence summarises the case outcome well, but you might strengthen it by connecting the client’s success back to your specific contribution. For instance: “The research I conducted on the supplier's selective distribution system proved pivotal to the Tribunal's unanimous decision."</li> </ol><p></p><p><strong><u>My Final Thoughts: </u></strong>Both sections are very strong and reflect a high level of legal competence and understanding. With slight refinements, such as improving flow, adding specificity, and weaving achievements into the narrative, I believe they could become even more compelling. </p><p></p><p>Great job and best of luck with the apps…!!!</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Amma Usman, post: 189879, member: 36740"] Hey [USER=38040]@Sad_Old_Grad[/USER] , Thanks for sending this through. Also, please never feel like it’s a bother - we’re here to help! I also completely get how nerve twitching the whole process can be. I’ve provided some detailed feedback below; [U][B][/B][/U] [B][U]Role (Junior Legal Assistant, Non-UK Organisation)[/U][/B] [LIST=1] [*]The reference to ensuring "the legal use of materials" is a great start, but it would be even more impactful to specify how this was achieved. For instance, did you apply particular provisions of international copyright law or specific treaties, such as the Berne Convention or any jurisdiction-specific regulations? Mentioning these can demonstrate a deeper understanding of the legal frameworks you navigated and show the complexity of your work. [*]Highlighting the multilingual aspect of your work can showcase your ability to navigate multi-jurisdictional matters. Specify the languages involved and how they added complexity to your tasks. Did you translate or interpret legal texts, or liaise with parties who communicated in different languages? [*]There’s a slight disjoint between the second and third sentences. For example, "I was [B][U](also)[/U][/B] responsible for maximising…" would improve the connection and help clarify that the cost-effectiveness and legal soundness efforts were part of a larger strategy, tying them back to the earlier discussion on compliance. [*]While the description is strong, it could benefit from showcasing the outcomes or achievements more explicitly. For instance, how successful were you in securing cost-effective agreements? Were there instances where you resolved particularly challenging copyright issues? Numbers or examples of high-stakes situations could add significant weight. [*][B][I][U]The last sentence is[/U][/I][/B] [B][I][U]excellent[/U][/I][/B] as it demonstrates an understanding of the distinction between private individuals and businesses in a commercial legal context. Consider elaborating briefly on how you adapted your communication and negotiation strategy in such cases. Did it require softer negotiation skills or additional legal investigation? [/LIST] [B][U]Role (Intern)[/U][/B] [LIST=1] [*]Replace brackets with dashes or commas for a more seamless and polished flow. For example, “primarily pro-bono” could be written with dashes or with commas for clarity. [*]The section does a great job of showcasing your skills, but it could be even more concise in listing the competencies gained. Instead of stating them as a series, consider weaving them into the narrative. For example: "The preparatory work, including meticulous legal research, constructing arguments, and assembling bundles, developed my client-facing skills and provided a practical appreciation of the importance of detail in complex legal matters." Dashes could also be used here instead. [*]The explanation of your role in the main case is detailed and insightful. However, you could further emphasise how your research contributed to the outcome. For example: "My research into the supplier's distribution system and its discriminatory practices directly supported the client’s claim, with the Tribunal unanimously finding in their favour." [*]While the use of terms like "Selective Distribution Agreement (SDA)" and "hard-core restriction" is appropriate, consider briefly explaining them for clarity if this section is aimed at non-specialist readers or recruiters unfamiliar with competition law specifics. This ensures accessibility without undermining the technical detail. [*]Although the section focuses well on your individual contributions, adding a line about collaborating with the solicitor or supporting clients could showcase teamwork skills, which are equally valued. For example: "Working closely with the solicitor, I developed an understanding of how to align legal research with practical client needs, ensuring that tribunal arguments were legally sound and also comprehensible to litigants in person." [*]The concluding sentence summarises the case outcome well, but you might strengthen it by connecting the client’s success back to your specific contribution. For instance: “The research I conducted on the supplier's selective distribution system proved pivotal to the Tribunal's unanimous decision." [/LIST] [B][U]My Final Thoughts: [/U][/B]Both sections are very strong and reflect a high level of legal competence and understanding. With slight refinements, such as improving flow, adding specificity, and weaving achievements into the narrative, I believe they could become even more compelling. Great job and best of luck with the apps…!!! [/QUOTE]
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