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<blockquote data-quote="Nat" data-source="post: 5513" data-attributes="member: 513"><p>Hi all</p><p></p><p>I am taking a slightly different approach and merging the why my/why them paragraphs. I find it easier to match my skills with the firm's profile. You can see an example below on why commercial law. Let me know what you think, this is only a first draft so feel free to be brutal!</p><p></p><p><em>I have always been commercially driven and I am seeking an opportunity to help clients bring their business ambitions to life. I am keen to be part of their commercial journeys and contribute to their success. My entrepreneurial spirit can be spotted from the age of 7 when I created a handwritten newspaper and tried to sell it to neighbours in order to generate money for my first computer. Later evidence of my commercial nature can be found during my role as a Senior Records Co-ordinator where I handled a negotiation for a free description audit, which resulted to savings of £5,000 for the business. Precedent was set and this service continued to be offered free of charge to the firm. Commercial law practised at a firm like White & Case caters to my entrepreneurial mindset. Reading about the firm’s negotiations between Concordia and its creditors on its US$3.7 billion recapitalisation, I wished I could be part of such transaction and help clients like Concordia execute their business strategies.</em></p><p></p><p>Thank you!</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Nat, post: 5513, member: 513"] Hi all I am taking a slightly different approach and merging the why my/why them paragraphs. I find it easier to match my skills with the firm's profile. You can see an example below on why commercial law. Let me know what you think, this is only a first draft so feel free to be brutal! [I]I have always been commercially driven and I am seeking an opportunity to help clients bring their business ambitions to life. I am keen to be part of their commercial journeys and contribute to their success. My entrepreneurial spirit can be spotted from the age of 7 when I created a handwritten newspaper and tried to sell it to neighbours in order to generate money for my first computer. Later evidence of my commercial nature can be found during my role as a Senior Records Co-ordinator where I handled a negotiation for a free description audit, which resulted to savings of £5,000 for the business. Precedent was set and this service continued to be offered free of charge to the firm. Commercial law practised at a firm like White & Case caters to my entrepreneurial mindset. Reading about the firm’s negotiations between Concordia and its creditors on its US$3.7 billion recapitalisation, I wished I could be part of such transaction and help clients like Concordia execute their business strategies.[/I] Thank you! [/QUOTE]
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